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Thanks a lot for all the feedback guys, I fixed the stuff that could be fixed (hands, background color, etc) the rest will be helpful for my improvement. :heart:

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- Faber Castell colored pencils, red acrylic for eyes and background
- Drawing paper, size A4
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Ok I truly love this deviation because of its beautiful coloring and attention to detail. The soft folds of the fabric are amazing and the expression is perfect; almost like she's smirking (which is really amazing since her mouth is covered) The way you portrayed her is simply stunning.
The crow is also drawn perfectly as if it sets off the girl.
Some things to improve on would be that I think your drawing lacks impact. Maybe more contrast on the kimono would make this more appealing from the thumbnail. I seriously think that this drawing deserves much more attention as you are amazingly skilled with color pencils. The key is impact. Thats what most people look for.
Also I think that the background is a little plain despite the cracks. For higher contrast maybe a darker color could be used to gradient the bottom to the top (maybe a red brown, sienna or crimson brown) to set off the tree and make that stand out more.
I really had to think about things to improve on because this piece is so perfectly executed. Well done!
What do you think?
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